剑桥雅思4作文范文 第1篇

1. 文章基本呈现了图表中的所有数字。为了避免数字过多的情况，同一学位水平中男女所占比例只出现了一个（总和为100%）。不影响我们对图表的认知。2. 文章结尾处总结了图表的整体特点，即文章来自老烤鸭雅思男性在高等学位和低等学位所占比例较多，而女性则在本科阶段所占比例较多。3. 文章对数据进行了合理对比。主体段一开始先指出男女差异最大的类别。然后将剩余类别按照男性多于女性或者女性多于男性进行分类比较。

剑桥雅思4作文范文 第2篇

题目：

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.

*comic *books *radio *television *film *theatre

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雅思写作范文：

With the progress of mankind’s culture, people communicate information each other in more and more various way, including books, radio, television and so forth. Lots of benefits withstanding, shortcoming also can not be neglected for these three ways.

Firstly, book is a familiar word that most people prefer. Lots of people have hobbies of reading books for the reason that book is a place where writers can exchange their own viewpoints or theories to readers and readers can also know about the personalities of writer. Nevertheless, books do not have the quality of time efficiency and just represent some certain persons’ view.

In terms of radio, apart from newspapers, radio may be the cheapest way for people to keep pace with the news or information. Just one radio is what we need to listen to broadcasting for communicating. And we can do many other things such as driving, riding while we are listening to the radio. However, radio can just satisfy our senses of hearing because of its lack of screen.

Finally, for the television, TV has the quality of time efficiency and satisfies our visual senses. Television is a place where there is always much information for us to realize or communicate with each other. We can communicate the views on TV with ours while we enjoy the TV programs or news. But TV is always too sophisticated for the kids, particularly some violent or blue scenes do really have bad impacts on children.

In conclusion, I think TV would be the most effective way of these three ways for people to communicating information each other on condition that Some related legislation could be so perfect in the future that violent or blue scenes could be restricted.

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剑桥雅思4作文范文 第3篇

文章用词丰富，持有学位使用了held，with，reach等进行同义替换。同时比较过程中除了使用比较级之外，还用了outnumber这样的词来展示自己的词汇积累。

Grammatical Range

语法结构方面，文章虽然也有各种各样的从句，但并不是每个句子都很复杂。关键在于句子结构各不相同。灵活使用各种非谓语动词，状语前置来展现句子的多样性。

in terms of 在某方面…

substantial difference in 在…方面存在巨大差异。substantial可以替换big，significant等词汇。

by contrast 相比之下。用于连接不同的情况。

marginally 少许地，轻微地。可以用在比较级之前用于修饰程度。

outnumber （在数量上）压到，比…多。可以用于替换比较级。

counterpart 对应的事物/人。可以用来指代句子中之前已经提到的主语或者宾语的对应对象，如这篇文章就用了female counterparts来与前面的men对应。

constitute 构成。可以与make up, consist, represent等代表比例的词替换。